i like the positions in which the people are posed. i think this would look really good for a front cover of a college magazine, if not this one then similar, two people back to back.
These are my magazine drafts in which in the end will be colourful and attract adults and teenagers attention. currently i am more for using 'do you want to improve your education?' magazine front cover.
I like the top draft the best it appears more interesting and casual.